Here's this weeks progress on the initial part of the video, please ignore the play blast at the end. Any feedback on timing and composition would be grateful.
Lots I like, feels very pro - but it does seem odd that the circle crops the human figure - it feels cluttered - a bit 'underdesigned' in terms of the negative space etc. I think you need to re-configure your interface to stop your elements clipping each other.
Hey Justin,
ReplyDeleteLots I like, feels very pro - but it does seem odd that the circle crops the human figure - it feels cluttered - a bit 'underdesigned' in terms of the negative space etc. I think you need to re-configure your interface to stop your elements clipping each other.
Thanks Phil, both Andi and Alex said the same thing about the overlap. I'll get right on that tomorrow :)
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