I've added sound effects where Phil had previously said to add them and made a cut with the green balls. Any feedback on these elements would be great :)
Personally, I think all the changes are good changes (and Tom B, who is sitting beside me is in agreement!). However, we both feel that you need some kind of 'ending' - a 'shut-down' graphic or similar to tell your viewer that this segment of the presentation is at end. I can imagine using the 'green ball' transition a third time as a link back to the planet image, and then some additional bit of business signalling the termination of the transmission?
Hey Justin,
ReplyDeletePersonally, I think all the changes are good changes (and Tom B, who is sitting beside me is in agreement!). However, we both feel that you need some kind of 'ending' - a 'shut-down' graphic or similar to tell your viewer that this segment of the presentation is at end. I can imagine using the 'green ball' transition a third time as a link back to the planet image, and then some additional bit of business signalling the termination of the transmission?