Yeah, it definitely has potential. If I were to interpretit , those lights look mad and staring at us . And since we (not those lights) are the viewers its kind of strange to feel being stared at, really unsetteling :)
Yes. You should also think about that light goes to the direction where the lamps are pointed to. Right now lighting angles are pretty random. The drawing reminds dentist's cabinet actually. It's one of the biggest childhood fears - cool.