Tuesday, 16 April 2013

Major Project - Initial Graphic @Alan/Phil

Here's this weeks progress on the initial part of the video, please ignore the play blast at the end. Any feedback on timing and composition would be grateful. 


  1. Hey Justin,

    Lots I like, feels very pro - but it does seem odd that the circle crops the human figure - it feels cluttered - a bit 'underdesigned' in terms of the negative space etc. I think you need to re-configure your interface to stop your elements clipping each other.

    1. Thanks Phil, both Andi and Alex said the same thing about the overlap. I'll get right on that tomorrow :)